‘Not A Villain’ Webcomic – Page 342

 

And thus ends this Reality section. YAY!!!! I have time for a life again! *happy dance*

I hope this massive peak into the Reality side of this story was insightful. Now it's back to cheery and bright (not to mention waaaaay easier to color) L.i.F.e!

 

Flynn

And you wait is over . . . soon. Just not because of me, as I have an entirely unrelated comment.

So, L.i.F.E. stands for life is for everyone, so why is it capitalized L.i.F.e. instead of L.i.f.E.?

A Nonny Mouse

Additional reasons (that Aneeka can retro-claim if desired) šŸ˜‰
(1) It is consistent with the consonants both being capitalized and the vowels both lowercase.
(2) I think it looks easier to say. If it were capitalized L.i.f.E., I would feel like it should be pronounced “Liffy”.

Thomas

Good on you for your hard work.

I think we are all just as eagre to get back to the L.I.F.E. part ourselves. šŸ™‚

LIliet

Well at least now Jake has an idea planted about why Kat MIGHT be doing this. And if he starts paying attention to this getting proven/disproven… Kat isn’t exactly subtle. Yay for chances!

Alex
I am not sure whether or not you’ve explained his inner turmoil sufficiently, because I’ll need to re-read the comic eventually anyway. Mostly I remember how you loved or hated how various panels turned out. šŸ˜‰ Oh, and the Dude’s adventure. And how the Switzerland dialect was too much for even their advanced translation engine. XD But if I recollect correctly, he’s her former childhood friend and therefore he still feels sympathy for her, but he isn’t sure whether she’s a villain or – ahem – not a villain. Also he doesn’t know whether or not he should continue to… Read more »
natchu96

Since he frequently denies that a hacker alone can cause so much destruction, whether or not that is even true in the first place I’ve always gotten the feeling that Jake wasn’t sure she was a villain in the first place.

Alexander The 1st

“Too late.”

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Anyways Aneeka – thanks for putting in the effort for the Reality pages – definitely enjoying the layers of plot revelations (Back when Kim was talking about Dr. Grace, I was looking through the archive and noticed that Kim already made an L.I.F.E. appearance – having more context to the power structures was pretty rewarding for me), and looking forward to seeing how the conversations and events here tie back into L.I.F.E. and the Game.

SRP
Rereading the last pages I’d say, Jake’s conflicted because Kleya is/was family to him and he has no idea, how her stance on this matter is. He wants to discover the truth, but he might inadvertently kill the rest of humanity instead. Simply betraying her will get Kleya get simply killed instead, without any chance to explain herself or even to redeem herself. So either he protects the survivors and offs Kleya, or he protects Kleya and potentially offs the survivors. He doesn’t like ending up offing people, so he has chosen for now the option which has at least… Read more »
Liliet

I think so, too.

Alex

Which option do you mean? The option of playing the game with her, getting close to her and maybe finding out the truth that way?

SRP

Yes. And Aneeka confirmed it in another comment. Yay!

Kris

I know you work hard on the real world stuff, but for some reason I like the L.i.F.e style more. Maybe because L.i.F.e’s not as scary as reality.

Megan

That was a fantastic stretch of pages, I can’t believe the Reality section is over already! This was a great immersion into this side of the story, and as much as I love Kat, it was nice to see some of the others’ motivations.

That said, that was a perfect way to end things, and now I can’t wait to see how things are going inside L.i.F.e.

Navian

I’d say it’s enough that his inner turmoil was made clear. It’s understandable for him to be conflicted without knowing why, so I don’t feel confused, I’m just in suspense. And that’s a good thing.

Luke

I’ll be glad to get back to the superficially cheerful L.I.F.e style, too.

The Reality pages are lovely, expository, and set the mood immediately… But they look absolutely murderous to draw! I’d rather the effort go into the story and characterization. šŸ™‚

Though honestly, you have have 342 pages of excelling at all three, so far…

Atros
The funny thing that noone mentions, is I mean… assume someone does rat her out. With D being as pervasive as he is, and her in a position to apparently have data on the entire planet, including the location of the shifting poles and on volcanic eruptions the world over, as well as be able to reroute food to herself if she was willing to… What the h*** could they do about it? I mean, even if they discovered she’s the “evil cyborg girl” their best tactical option would be to NEVER MENTION IT. Because if they chase her off… Read more »
Lucifer

That…. is a very good point. What could they do? Even if they backtracked her, they’d find an area in the middle of some ocean, and by the time they got there, she’d be long gone, if I remember the earlier Reality segment right….

Fred

So… have you considered doing a hardcopy version of your comic where you have the page on one side, and your commentary on the other side?

Flynn

I like that idea. The left page could be the comic, full color and all that and the right page could be the comic faded/grayed out as a background for your comments or clarifications.

Kaian
I may be dense but going down the facts: V is considered a virus by others but is actually an AI Kleya was a prodigy and learned vast amounts of computer work, including getting a cyber enhancement rig that was deemed a failure to work. Kleya liked to win. Hackers took control of robots. (Not Kleya near as I can tell) The Earth’s poles reversed and there was massive devastation that leveled society. To the point that there is little of anything around and people are hooking into L.iF.e to escape reality and the loss. Because of the robot rampage… Read more »
Zigraphix

I don’t think we can assume Kleya is innocent of hacking the mech armored soldiers. After her dad was taken away, she went on some kind of rampage, and she definitely feels guilty about what happened to her mother, who died when cyborgs destroyed the hospital she was in.

I doubt she had anything to do with the magnetic pole shift, and she may not have been the only hacker causing problems before that, but she’s got quite a lot to answer for.

Phyra

I think her mother might have died before the cyborgs destroyed the hospital, and in her grief Kleya destroyed the hospital. Thus only looking like she killed her mother when she really didnt. Maybe.

Kai
While this section was nice, I have to agree, it really didn’t tell us much more then what we already knew about the characters. We knew Jake and Kleya were friends and worked together, and that Kleya played a part in her mothers death even if accidental. You stressed this reality bit had to come out, and while I agree its nice to see what the people are going through, look like and see a bit of the city, it also be nice to add in new details as well, So far, this only showed that Kleya’s father was taken… Read more »
PBX Jay

Love the shading and the mood/effect of the last panel. Nicely composed with the lines drawing you in to the center and then focusing on Jake appearing very small and lost there. Excellently done. I stumbled on this comic and was at first put off by the poor graphics but the development and story line pulled me in šŸ™‚
I like how there are 3 layers Reality L.i.F.e and the Game and the visual differences between them.
And now enough of Jake’s inner turmoil…. back to the story development whoot whoot!

Ryan
Perhaps the Hakido translated her thoughts to D? She was talking hackers from all over the world and was forming a group (Or they found her) and she was thinking about being, for lack of a better word, mischievous (Some of the less violent attacks). At this point she was also working on D, fixing him or something. Her mom finds out, argues with daughter, mom goes to the hospital for volunteer work. Kleya is angry, so she thinks “I wish she would e attacked by robots” or something similar. Hakido translates thought to D, D happy that she is… Read more »
SRP

This would make a lot of sense. Scary thought…

Crestlinger

If anyone could make a game move into reality, she certainly could use D to hack it:
*Raises hands and smiles.
*WHAM!

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