sojikai

Ooh, nice use of one of the oldest tricks in the book: suddenly robbing the MC of whatever advantage they may have. This is a great opportunity for some character development, or a decent comedic scene, or potentially both. I am interested in seeing where you will take this.

Aneeka

Ha ha. I didn’t know it was an old trick – I just thought it’d be fun. Plus Kleya’s too arrogant/confident. She needs to come down a notch or two 😈

sojikai

It’s a classic way to build tension. After all, it wouldn’t be too exciting if the hero didn’t face an unforseen challenge, would it?

Aneeka

Yep, very true. The story would get boring fast if the hero always knew what to do and there was no threat.

Wolfbane

Oh man…I loved the incentive! Hahaha! The bandit is definitely your best drawn character by the way…can’t wait for the no-specials showdown!

Aneeka

I’m glad you loved the incentive! It made me laugh the entire time I was making it.

And thanks for the compliment about the Bandit! Since he’s ‘supposed’ to be drawn by the TENka artists, I’ve tried to make him look more ‘professionally’ done. Glad to hear it’s working!

sojikai

I am in love with purposely drawing characters better than others. With this story, it is quite effective.

Aneeka

Thanks! I’m glad it’s working. I’m curious, do you know of other webcomics that purposely draw some characters better than others? I’d love to check them out if you know any.

lmurray

LOVED the incentive where it shows what she wants to do to him…I laughed so hard!! Keep it up…its actually interesting and fun which is more than I can say for some others!

Aneeka

Ha ha. Thanks!! I know that is high praise coming from you so yay!

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