‘Not A Villain’ Webcomic – Page 201

 

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Also, to whoever posted up the review on my new ebook on Amazon:  You're awesome!! Thank you so much for posting up a review!

And thanks to all who have downloaded a sample, bought it, and/or read it. It's so cool to have people interested in my stories 😀

 

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OrtwinS

ooooh, will we get a glimpse of reality? O.o

ps, love Kleya’s face in panel 4.
pps, writing a review? good idea!

OrtwinS

Kobo has no review option :(.
But you got some star ratings (3 x 5/5).

vendetta

Yeah, her Sponsor said that she had some key…wait a minute, how does she know that.

Ok, she was quite inquisitive the last few comics, but I thought she was just a nosey kid.

Tre

very likely her sponsor has a feed or two. so anything done around her sponsor will be known.

Mary Shoup

Sandra said it to Mina, presumably she was around at the time.

Aye-non-eee-mouse

Panel 5, first word bubble – you’ve got two “she”‘s in a row there.

Elizabeth

Sandra seems to be pretty chatty about Kleya. I don’t think this is going to help build trust between them….

cwDeici

Hopefully it doesn’t reflect on Mae either that she just mentioned it. And yay for seeing Kleya irl!

Damien

Does this mean we can see Kleya In her habitat?

Tre

hahaha, the wild Kleya and her survival habits exposed.

Strange

“logging out”? Guess we might get to see what she looks like in reality. She’s probably pretty hungry by now as well. Unless being logged in slows down the metabolism

Steven

O_O
. . . ARE WE GOING TO GET TO SEE REALITY!!!!!!!!!!
Now I have something else to look forward to besides a Saturday with friends this week! 😀
Can’t wait!

Arthur

*a wild lurker appeared*
Reality? :O
Well, Aneeka can still either give give us close-ups only (like the keyboard and hands), switch to following another character or just skip ahead a little. 😐 (Second option seems the most plausible.)

justAnobody

WHOO HOOO MORE BANDIT. . . and dude

Tre

mmmmm, well…not sure there would be much to see outside of Kleya herself. and be easy enough to not show much of her. close ups, as you said. and near misses.

Sonja

I have a question concerning “The Wanted Child”. I read the extract and really liked it! But I don’t have an e-book reader. Can I still download and read it, e.g. on my PC?

Marscaleb

I love this comic and all, but you keep losing me with all the character interactions. How does Kleya know these folks again, and what is she doing here?
Am I the only one who keeps losing track? A flow chart or something would be nice.

syreka

The people from the past few pages are Mina’s family.

http://navcomic.com/character/mina/

Also… I absolutely love this webcomic. I read a lot of webcomics, but this it the only one that I check constantly between 6pm and 7pm Tuesdays and Fridays (I’m in Australia) just so that I can read it as soon it updates.

Navert

I’ve set up a wikia page that tracks some of this. Check it out at http://notavillain.wikia.com. Go ahead and fill it in as well. Mina’s and Mae’s pages are very space (http://notavillain.wikia.com/wiki/Mina_Lilly, http://notavillain.wikia.com/wiki/Mae_Lilly) and I haven’t even created a page for the mom or dad (do we even know their names?).

Poke

What I usually do when I get lost in characters is start over… I am usually aware when this happens after about 100 pages. I’ve read through this one about 5 times. The first time there were only around 60 pages, and then I reread it. The next times were because I loved it so much.

Sonja

Thanks for the fast answer! I have no Amazon account, but a friend of mine has one. Or I’ll try Kobo, this looks interesting, too. I keep you informed.
Go on writing such great stories! 🙂

66scarylion44

Does reality get naptime too? What about LiFe kindergarteners?

Steven

I’m noticing that Aneeka has been oddly quiet about the “Reality” comments.
Something’s gonna happen. . .

Artificer-Urza

I guess we’ll just have to wait for the next page to see if there is a big reveal.
Thanks for your advice for the css for my site. I finally got things up and running.

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